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Post by physboff on Aug 10, 2006 17:01:14 GMT
"... or so Mercury and her lawyers agreed, although Mercury's parents, being rather overprotective, were sceptical. However, her parents had no choice but to accept the offer, as they did not have the money to file a huge lawsuit. That night, however, Mercury was lying in bed when..."
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Post by Buddy Pal on Aug 10, 2006 17:23:14 GMT
her former nanny came to the door. no longer did she have to be pretend to be good because everyone thought she was now dead but cause she was a witch she'd cast a spell protecting herself. she easily overpowered mercurys parents and was sonon in mercurys room. face to face with her former nanny mercury
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Post by airyfairy on Aug 10, 2006 17:23:49 GMT
"... the nanny appeared above her. still ignoring and disbelieving their daughter, Mercury's parents had put a dead body into the cauldron of acid and let the wicked witch go. Now she had come back for revenge and standing over Mercury she held up a large knife over Mercury's heart. The blade glistened and twinkled in the moonlight that came filtering through the window of Mercury's turret room. Just as the nanny was wabout to lower the knife and plant it hilt deep into Mercury's chest, Mercury's eyes flew open, she grabbed the witchs wrist and twisted her arm around her back, the witch dropped the knife from her suddenly nerveless fingers. Mercury threw the witch into the corner and kicked her hard in the stomach, winding her. The witch gasped for breath in the corner as Mercury bent down and gripped the knife..."
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Post by Buddy Pal on Aug 10, 2006 17:25:41 GMT
ha ha double post and mine was first so we continue with that sorry fairy
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Post by physboff on Aug 10, 2006 17:27:25 GMT
"... realised that she was outpowered, as she had no magical powers. Unfortunately for Mercury's former nanny, Mercury's tunnel had caused the barriers between dimensions to become unstable, and so just as the wicked witch was about to cast a spell on Mercury an elephant with six legs appeared out of nowhere right on top of her, promptly squashing her, before disappearing again. Stunned and amazed by this chain of events, Mercury..."
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Post by airyfairy on Aug 10, 2006 17:27:33 GMT
but mine was so gooood! *pouts* fine, but just for that im gona fall over and its gona be ur fault *falls over* OW im not ok
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Post by airyfairy on Aug 10, 2006 17:28:29 GMT
"...killed herself. THE END"
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Post by airyfairy on Aug 10, 2006 17:28:45 GMT
hehe only kidding
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Post by Buddy Pal on Aug 10, 2006 17:29:23 GMT
agreed your story was better but we have to obey the rules
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Post by physboff on Aug 10, 2006 17:29:48 GMT
lol, that was fun! We should publish it... or maybe not
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Post by airyfairy on Aug 10, 2006 17:30:34 GMT
i didnt say it was better, i said it was good, thats some of my best work up there! lol, and me the aspiring writer, thats the best i can do!
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Post by Buddy Pal on Aug 10, 2006 17:30:45 GMT
new story. once upon a time there was a handsome prince who
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Post by airyfairy on Aug 10, 2006 17:33:31 GMT
"...discovered that his parents were actually his adoptve parents. Not only was he adopted but he was also the biological son of a peasent farmer, given to the king and queen because they could not have children and the farmer could not afford a child, in fact his farm was about to be closed down and he thrown out of his house. Upon discovering this the prince set out to find his real father..."
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Post by Buddy Pal on Aug 10, 2006 17:35:47 GMT
and give him a piece of his mind. how dare he abondon me thought the prince. who does he think he is just giving me away like that there should be a law against it. the prince was fuming so much so that he
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Post by physboff on Aug 10, 2006 17:38:10 GMT
"...stupidly decided to vent his anger by kicking a very large boulder by the side of the road. Not only did the prince hurt his foot by doing this, but he also realised..."
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